Under the bed
Little jeffy who was wearing his lightning
mcqueen Pjs.
hi heard a noise coming from
Under his bed he but doesn't know what
the noise was.
Then he had a look and he
couldn't
See what it was.
All he heard a scratching
noise then hi saw write light.
AAAAAAHHHHHH he cried there's a ghost
then hi raced to his mum.
The next morning
he went and had another
Look.
Om gosh Mitten had a kitten. Mum he
yelled Mitten had a kitten.
He named the
kitten frank.
this is work i have written and edited myself. its still in work king progress
Do you want me to post a other peace like this?
good to see you are writing Cage, I really enjoyed it and would love to hear more. maybe just have a read through and see if you need to check any spelling
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